Open Poetry #15 |
On Pain And Healing |
Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
Buried under a blanket of darkness Lies a small pink bud....... Baby girl, soft, pink, fragrant. Surrounded by a golden yellow glow. Enter the horror, terror, A perverse man Known as "daddy" His abuse, and lies, and secrets Bury the rose Under a blackness Of pain and shame. Years and years pile on top of each other Until, By the time she's an adult She's become a fake A plastic, artificial person. Whatever you want from her She'll do---- The best that she can-- She works so hard To make others happy. The blanket of pain is whitewashed And appears to be happiness But, Deep inside it hurts. Enter the healing touch Of a friend. From the purple haze A blue light breaks through the blackness To illuminate the small pink bud. The work begins-- Slow, Tedious, Painful, Each step reducing the facade. Melting the trashy, Plastic petals. Bringing the true rose in the warm glow of love. Love, support, healing, nurturing, Allows this bud to begin to grow Slowly, The woman unfolds To Finally break free- A PERFECT COMPLETE ROSE. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...with a fragrance to be appreciated by all, I might add. There is always potential lying dormant until someone special discovers it and waters it... Congradulations. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Well... I agree with Mark first of all and would add... it is with growth that we learn to bloom, and we rarely have the choice of where we are planted...sometimes in stones, sometimes in fertile ground... I would say those that grow in stones...are a bit tougher... and the smell of success..a bit sweeter. Congrats on making it |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A wonderful message for the blessing of healing...James |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a fine piece here and I love the beginning of the promise of this stanza: Enter the healing touch Of a friend. From the purple haze A blue light breaks through the blackness To illuminate the small pink bud. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I thank your friend for the support he/she has given, allowing you to bloom to the realization that you are a perfect rose. Good work, Lisann. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Thank you for sharing your journey..you are not alone..healing does take time and patience and effort..but like a garderner caring for the roses the blooming is worth it. |
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