Open Poetry #15 |
Liberation Senryu |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Liberation Knowledge and kindness the keys to liberation open life's gold doors By Melissa P. Monette |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
they can definitely be keys to liberation |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Most true. Beautifully said. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ And you have an abundance of both qualities. This is very nice. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Melissa- Very nicely done.. Enjoyed.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Deep meaning...... Kudos! Loved it! ((~.~)) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Bump |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
another bump!! i feel anyone can write a 17-syllable musing but very few can really write one in the spirit desired of a senryu but this is one |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
My favorite form and I love this one. Makes me envious Well done indeed! Finally fixed :) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
as I've said many times before. . . you do these with the skill of a master. . . well done my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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