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A Smart Senryu
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A Smart Senryu |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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A Smart Senryu By Melissa P. Monette ~ A thousand mistakes is but life's education along wisdom's way ~ |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And I am at 999 - this was good Melissa! ~ You do this dance only once ~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Melissa- Very true, my friend..  Nicely done. LOL @ Mysteria...that means you've almost got it right!!  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
so true, perfect title |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ I got my Remedial Certificate ! Working on my Doctorate !  Brilliant little piece of work. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Hmmm.. I swear I have made more... Nice tidy piece of wisdom.. I enjoyed |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
But, but, Melybee....I'm at 1,243...does that mean I'm overly wise or I missed the turn and didn't grab the certificate and now have to go through it all again? Smiling...Enjoyed! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ha ha I won't tell you what number I'm on, but if there was a contest I sure would have won that A very Smart Senryu  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Cool, clear, sparkling lakes allows a nice vacation in memory stay sorry couldn't help myself |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Good one, a keeper. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this needs to be on some sort of plaque. . . it's just like that. . . words of wisdom. . . not suprisingly, it's from you. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
okay, so I can't count past eleventy seven!!!! Does that mean that someone will count for me until I get wise enough to do so on my own. But wait........do I really have to start making mistakes and not be so perfect?????????? Oh well, if it is in the interest of wisdom........why not. Wonderfully put oh wise child of the northern playground. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-22-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
So true. Nicely said. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
then I have a Masters degree  " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Great one....haven't count mine yet, but I thought that i've made a lot more. Charisma |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wise words and a great write!! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OH YES MELISSA!!!! Now if we were all just wise enough to learn from the lessons.....thank you for this wonderful write. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
They are the perfect stepping stones along the way. I love this! Sincerely, Rwood |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
life's education? now, i can finally make excuses for my mistakes!! heehee |
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