Open Poetry #15 |
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A Night To Savour |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
There has never been anyone like you You look at me and I become lost in your eyes You warm my soul with your endearing smile You touch me and my heart skips a beat You love me and my heart belongs to you You excite my mind and stimulate my senses Did real love ever exist in my heart before you came along or was I fooled by love? And am I now merely a part of a beautiful dream that seems to have no end or am I really lying here with you watching you sleep as I feel the warmth of your skin against mine Two hearts - one soul two strangers who became lovers two lovers whose love can only be measured by each others happiness This night belongs to us it's ours to cherish and devour How much we'll savour this night as such a night as this may never be again Suetang |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Savor every moment... : ) Good Job! Thank You |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ 'two lovers whose love can only be measured by each others happiness' That's just what it should all be about~ Nicely said, poetess. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very romantic and touching, nice write Throw your heart out in front of you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh what a night. James |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sue, you really understand how to express emotions that are not always easy to translate... Through each of your poems, I vicariously touch another facet of Love, some of which trigger my own memories. Blissful... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Suetang, yet again another beautiful write ![]() Loved this. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
You're wise to savour it and know its potential for finite felicity. Enoyed. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah the romantic in you emerged nicely in this one Sue! ~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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