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Kitty**
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0 posted 2001-07-18 02:25 PM



Her eyes dance with glitter of stars.
Her cheeks kissed by a rose.
Her hair sprayed with the moonbeams of night,
The aura around her glows.

Her days have become magic.
Her heaven is no longer 'above'.
Her world has become a marvelous place.
She is a.... Lady In Love.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2001 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-18 02:28 PM



Ah, this is a delightful dance of words!  Well done!

Kitty**
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2 posted 2001-07-18 02:36 PM


Lady In White....I barely got it on the board before you read it and answered...LOL...

Thank you..

I've had time to be here awhile today and to read, read, and read .
Better than any library!!

Kitty

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3 posted 2001-07-18 02:43 PM


Sounds like love to me   Well done.
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4 posted 2001-07-20 05:10 PM



Kitty-
   Ah yes...in love indeed..
   Nicely done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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5 posted 2001-07-20 05:20 PM


yep.. sounds like love...

very nice..


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6 posted 2001-07-21 04:14 AM


Nice writing Kitty...James
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7 posted 2002-02-17 03:58 PM


awww love is a wonderful feeling!
well done

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