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Open Poetry #15

Lady In Love

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2001-07-18 02:25 PM

Her eyes dance with glitter of stars.
Her cheeks kissed by a rose.
Her hair sprayed with the moonbeams of night,
The aura around her glows.

Her days have become magic.
Her heaven is no longer 'above'.
Her world has become a marvelous place.
She is a.... Lady In Love.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-07-18 02:28 PM

Ah, this is a delightful dance of words! Well done!

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

2 posted 2001-07-18 02:36 PM

Lady In White....I barely got it on the board before you read it and answered...LOL...

Thank you..

I've had time to be here awhile today and to read, read, and read .
Better than any library!!

Kitty

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-07-18 02:43 PM

Sounds like love to me

Well done.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-07-20 05:10 PM

Kitty-
   Ah yes...in love indeed..
   Nicely done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-20 05:20 PM

yep.. sounds like love...

very nice..

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-07-21 04:14 AM

Nice writing Kitty...James

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-02-17 03:58 PM

awww love is a wonderful feeling!
well done

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