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written last year before I knew of Sunshine at PIP smile
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written last year before I knew of Sunshine at PIP smile |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Good Morning Sunshine Virginia Salter good morning sunshine why don’t you smile at me the day is beginning sit down and have some tea we’ll chat about old times we’ll listen to our hearts we’ll sip of lemon sweetness and nibble on some tarts the world out there will go on by a doing what it pleases while we sit with feet up eating bread and cheeses good morning, Sunshine, give me a smile good morning, Sunshine, come sit awhile recall I love you, you love me, too we’ll bless the hours, just me and you © July 20, 2000 fun, don't you think, Sunshine? [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-11-2001).] |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very intersting and beautifully written. It is good if sunshine = "Sunshine"  |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Perhaps a revelation.... anyway there is more than one that brings sunshine into our lives.... there are so many wonderful people in the world with sunny personalities and I am so glad to have met the sunny one here at passions as well... and I am sure that "Sunshine" will arise to the occasion. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well now something said "come look at this" and my goodness....look at this! Thank you for this, Virginia! But as Bob says, there are plenty of folks out there that spread the sunshine...I am but just one little "ray" that sticks around... and in order to thank you appropriately, I dug around in the back rooms and came up with this, to hopefully grace your lovely poem back to you.... When I'm Gone When I never write again you shall not even know I'm gone not for long no, and I am not wrong you'll not know when I'm gone when I never write again can't imagine the where or when but if it should happen then won't be for long no, and I am never wrong for I have a beautiful dream you see of writing in calligraphy for a scribe of God I'll be no, and I am not wrong you'll not know when I'm gone for in your dreams I'll come and softly muse you with a hum lead your dreams to sway away and guide you in your dream today you'll not know when I'm gone and if for a moment you seem alone seek the Sun and you shall see a brilliant little reminder of me strong enough to melt the stone no, and I am not wrong… you'll not know when I am gone 01.05.01 |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
thank you EVERYONE! and Sunshine, what a lovely dream...what a lovely hope to be a scribe of God as He might allow us to 'feed' His gift of a talent to His children. Wonderful idea. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
VAS- this is a lovely write... enjoyed it much..  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Both poems are wonderfully written. They speak of frindship before it began, God's scribe, YES!!! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a beauty! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well i appoint myself to be your sunshine...grins |
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