Open Poetry #15 |
Twisted |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Such twisted intent still haunting my memories there should have been truth |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ouch. This one bites. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
there must always be truth between two committed else pain will result |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...I sense a ripple turning into a wave... ;-> For some reason... I can relate to this one... ;-> Bottom-line: I like it! -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Pain!!! Truth is a must! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes... this one has a bite... but it is very nicely said..and presents a truth we do well to consider.. I enjoyed |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, This says so much in so little words. I can sure relate, and as of recently, as you know.... Love, Elise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I agree wholeheartedly, Sandra. Twisting the truth never got anyone anyone. Nicely said. All writing comes |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh gosh, yes. Damnit! - Love your title lady. *Peace you. ~A. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
My reaction like SpitFire's Damn it! Well done. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
So true! Perfectly expressed in 3 lines Melissa~ |
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