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The Voice That Echoes My Heart
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The Voice That Echoes My Heart |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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The Voice That Echoes My Heart touch me in ways to remember embraced in fire started from an ember we stand together in the blue of flame where blaze sings and whispers your name I hear the voice that echoes my heart without you I’m not whole just part such tender heart part of your charms where I find my fortress in your arms "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Just lovely is this piece~ 'touch me in ways to remember embraced in fire started from an ember' Most impressive. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This is a beautiful expression of Love, indeed. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Romanticly cleaver, you are gifted. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
It's good to read you happy. Enjoyed much. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A charming and disarming write. Enjoyed. |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
I'm so glad you found it. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of your best poem so far  enjoy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Like this very much, especially that last stanza! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Helen, this is sensually lovely and flowed perfectly. I really enjoyed this and will save it in my library Melissa~ |
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