Open Poetry #15 |
More than friends??? |
Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
The night grew still and dark appeared The fear of everything settled in I sat alone By the fire pit and thought. You appeared from out of nowhere Your arms wrapped tightly around me I felt your lips brush my neck and I smiled. Worried thoughts disappreared for a moment as I got lost in your touch remembering Thinking of the last time I had anything anything quite this real Or is it? Would this new found love, this new security Would it all be gone by the morning light Or would we hold on with all we have to save each other from the past At last we had found something But it was never supposed to be with each other.... [This message has been edited by Martini (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oooh, I like this, I hope you hang on I hope it's real I hope for hope |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
VAS thanks so much I hope we hang on too. I need to hang on, for once everything seems right. thanks again for the response. "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm..*chills* this one brought...i like this a lot..great writing..i could feel the very pit of me feeling this! hugs, g "sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.." -demi moore |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
dare to hope and love love without reservation makes life much better |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I too hope you both hang on.. finding it is hard..holding on to it, even harder.. Nice poem!! |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Thank you all so much for your replys. It's looking like this one may turn out to be THE ONE, the funny part is that for years I saw him only as my friend, my closest friend, the person I set up with all my girlfriends and now I see him as a completely different person. thanks again for reading and replying "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" |
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