Open Poetry #15 |
A thank you to everyone here.. (that means you!!) |
Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
A THANK YOU. In this world of many minds a few of us connect. Upon a page of whitened snow stand out words of black that we won't forget. My eyes read your thoughts and my heart understands I recognize the pain that had controlled you hand. For in the writing we find a truth that in the end only you and I understand. In those times of blackest night when for control I had to fight I knew a kind heart would sense my tears and maybe inside themself they held the same fears. So I thank you now not with my voice but in a world of black and white vows of words that we write not by choice but by our hearts. Thanks for reading and understanding it is more then I could ask for. ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I would say you are very mis-named. Your voice rings out loud and clear....many truths in this work...well said |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Your feelings are felt by many my friend, including myself, and for that I thank YOU. Nicely written. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
UR SO SWEET!!! *huggles* |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Amazing what comes through our laryngitis, no? perhaps it is we who should thank you! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, indeed. Thank you. I look forward to more of your work |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Voiceless- Yes...much truth here.. I like this lots.. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and thank you for sharing. . . for in the sharing, we find healing. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
You've spoken many truths in this very nicely, written piece....thanks for sharing!! Nathan |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
not by choice but by our hearts fantastic!!! |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
"I knew a kind heart would sense my tears and maybe inside themself they held the same fears." Poets are indeed a sensitive sort, and you are among them. And since no one else has said it, "you are welcome". \\ |
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