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Puppy Chow
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Puppy Chow |
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Lance McLove New Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 8 |
Puppy Chow Rolling around on an old mat, Frolicsome fun as he flops about Unsuspectingly. The puppy fills his tummy with mother's milk And tries his little teeth on an old red sneaker Unsuspectingly. A little boy hugs his neck and kisses his nose. The puppy licks the jelly off his friend's cheeks Unsuspectingly. He wags his tail and yelps at his reflection And jumps on his brother's back Unsuspectingly. The master pours food into his dish And the young dog eats the poison-laced meat Unsuspectingly. A few days later, a man orders London Broil in a small restaurant down the block. He heartily eats clearing his plate . . . Unsuspectingly. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A chilling write...which has to be read very carefully...very macabre.... Welcome to Passions. Please, check your e-mail for a special welcome. Karilea |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Hey, Welcome.. That is totally well unsuspected... The way it was set up was great and the whole thing gets your attention and holds it greatly. Maybe I am morbid but good job! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yes definitely chilling...and happens far to often these days...welcome |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You definitely got my attention...unsuspectingly! More than a little dark, but with a twist of turn I do admire...will be reading more--Welcome to Passions! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interestingly written... a dark twist to your point..but appreciated |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
the title and your name attached to it definitely pulled me in...never expecting what I found, powerfully sad! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. Too macabre for my tastes. No pun intended  |
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