Open Poetry #15 |
Life, Memories, and More |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Moments gone, memories mine searching to keep, thoughts combine. Days of glory, stories unfold life once lived, cherished to hold. Life begun, not yet seen follow your heart, follow a dream. Each new day, a memory brought held in mind, in a heart caught. In every life, someday to see through every door, life holds a key. Take a chance, walk through the door life filled with memories, yet so much more. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes so much more... I enjoyed this..nice |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Great rhythm and rhymes..... Flows like an Autumn leaf on a melodious brook.... Loved it.... ((~.~)) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ahhh, yes, and a wonderful ending, Gentle Spirit. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very positive poem, greatly done! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
sometimes walking through a door can be devastating, but this poem makes it sound hopeful. "It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Just a quick pop in to say thanks to all! I appreciate it. *s* I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance. ~Garth~ |
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