Open Poetry #15 |
Words |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
WORDS There are times, In my more lucid moments Of reality, When eyes Long fogged over by life’s “crueler moments” clear to the image of you. And I think to myself, Ahhhhhhhh, This is what I have Stayed alive for. So, How do I tell you? There are only words, And they are so lacking When I see your eyes Or how the corners of your mouth Turn up In a silent smile Meant but for me. Our private joke. Just one of the small things Shared by two. A joining factor. Uniting two spirits That were lost In this great world Until the powers that be Brought them together. Completeness. For in you I’ve found the counterpart To that lost portion of my soul That I long ago Gave up for dead. Mere words. But they are all I possess To give you. Words. I love you. ```Sandra L. Hoisington |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
An interesting read, Sandra...Your critic flag leaves little room for one to make suggestions, so I shall keep mine to me... but know I enjoyed it! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
sandra, a reflection on sadness and loneliness with some brightness at the end. I hope that the love you have found can make up for the pain that went before. Thanks for sharing, enjoyed the read "Here I am in prison,here I am with a ball and chain There is whiskey in the jar-o" Traditional irish song. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ditto what brian Said.... I enjoyed.. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
....and those three words say so much more to a soul mate than you can possibly uderstand or express. So wonderful to read of your's and his saving love. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I think the greatest compliment a writer can receive is to take a bit of imagery, of heartfelt dreams, and spin them into a tale that others will believe is reality. Thank you for seeing "life" in these, my words. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
the entire piece is laced with a hope that will make the future brighter and words truer lovely piece, Seraphin |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
seraphin- Such beautiful thoughts you've penned.. Very nicely done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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FaeryKynn Junior Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 10Sanatoga, PA, USA |
That peice was very beautiful, seraphin. truly heartfelt poetry is always the best to read and you took that peice of your life and love and wrote it so wonderfully. thank you for posting it those three little words can mean so much to so many people,and in your poem you truly made them real for you..... If our fingers touch and hearts collide... I'll be a moonsbreath by your side |
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