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Origami Dream
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Origami Dream |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Origami Dream My life is folded around what's wanted To be those three little words-- I Love You. From one nimble sheet, my soul is daunted In muscles contorted without sinew. Like thrown confetti aloft in the street-- Floating, weightlessness, yet I am not torn. A paper phoenix fashioned heart complete, Desire alive, ablaze, but not reborn. Fragile wings designed of papier-mâché Rose me up from this hell-- I've flown away. -Lighthouse Bob |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Bob...this is one of your best! What a delight to see you here in Open...we don't get enough of your pennings over here... this is a treat! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very interesting images.... I enjoyed the word and idea play that I see... Good write! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
what a wonderful comparison...the twists and folds and magic transpires, lovely |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very creative bob..i felt like i was being lifted up up and away.. ~Victoria~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
have you ever tried to make one of those Origami birds??? It's not as easy as it looks!!!  great job with this one Bob. . .the title's what did it for me. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very nice, abstract piece....thanks for sharing!! Nathan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Superb work on this one, Bob. All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LightHouseBob~ Oh ... I like this very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I really liked this one and wished I will go look for more of yours, I especially loved this as it sums up the art perfectly: "Like thrown confetti aloft in the street-- Floating, weightlessness, yet I am not torn" This was beautifully done, thank you. If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thank you everyone for your kind replies and to all of you who read and did not reply as well. Thank you, Bob <>< |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
In muscles contorted without sinew. Like thrown confetti aloft in the street-- Floating, weightlessness, yet I am not torn. A paper phoenix fashioned heart complete, Bob some well written images, I really enjoyed this alot. "Here I am in prison,here I am with a ball and chain There is whiskey in the jar-o" Traditional irish song. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lighthousebob- Wonderfully penned verse. Enjoyed this one much! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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