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Lonely Night
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Lonely Night |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“LONELY NIGHT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Lonely all through the night, without you, I search and wonder, where you have gone… I held you tight, as the sun set in the sky when I awoke, all I could see was the dawn… I’d never lie with another, only you, for I would always be, by your side… Morning arrived too soon, that day, I didn’t really know, what to do… For I missed you, lying by my side, of that, I would never argue… I’d never lie with another, only you, for I would always be, by your side… Tears fell from my eyes, onto my lips, and they quivered, as I tasted you… I searched the misty morn, not knowing, if my heart once again, you made blue… I’d never lie with another, only you, for I would always be, by your side… So I say, please listen to my plea, I would lie here, waiting in the light… And if you would join me soon, both would never, have another, “Lonely Night”… ~~~~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... I enjoyed |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
You have written a beautiful, but sad poem. Also, painted many pictures. Thank you for sharing, ME |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
who could resist this! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Glad to see you again Bill, it's been a while I could enjoy your lovely poems, glad I caught you here. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes... such wonderful sentiments - and I LOVE the refrain... What a great song this one would make...  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Cpat Hair - thank you for the reply... Mother_Earth - yes, you have said that right about the beauty and sadness. And thanks for stopping by to read this poem of mine. Irish Rose - nice to see you again, and thanks for the reply. Titia Geertman - it feels so good to be back. Have had many things to do that took up too much time, but I'll be posting once again, and loving every minute of it. And thanks for the kind words. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nan - how did you know? This is the second song that I have written from my writings. Thanks, and it's good to be back! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful to see you Bill! I enjoyed the tender longing you portrayed in this piece, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I was thinking it sounded like a song! Very nice, though sad. Sandra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
you have so much romance and tenderness in you, surely good to have you back, Bill |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lonely Days, Lonely Nights sprang forth in my mind as I read down the lines...I know that is not the gist of your tune, but it did...come to mind... well done, Mr. Charles... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kit - And it's my pleasure to see you once again on PIP. Thank you for your kind words.. catalinamoon - the song came out well, and are writing others... Thank you for stopping by... VAS - it's very good to be back. And it feels good to post and see the replies and to write replies to other poets... Thank you. Sunshine - I can see how it came to mind, but wrote what I felt at the time. And nice to see you again. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wishful poetry and nicely done |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've heard this melody before BC. . . and I'm not suprised that you wrote it. . . my friend, you're one of the few that knows the heart. . . great job. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sentimental, pondering, melancholy, and honest... A tender expression and request. Nice, Bill. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
wayoutwalt - appreciate the kind words, and thank you for coming by... Sven - morning my friend, hope that you are well, and you are also one that knows the heart. Thanks once again... MARK - expressive words you say, and I thank you for them... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, this is so very sad, I too share these emotions, every night before I fall alseep, I pray to God that my love Joanna will be mine forever and I forever love her and never have to endure another lonely quiet evening again! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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