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Touched by a Moonflower
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Touched by a Moonflower |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The moon is a blossom tonight blooming tenderly golden petals drift in the breeze blushing with romance sweetness drifts into his window touching softly his skin a moonflower is shining tonight breathing closely to him laying softly upon his pillow petals of golden hair whispers upon his neck while in a slumber, unaware radiant upon the stem of night is a moonflower bare Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
beautifully done... soft and romantic... good write!!! I enjoyed |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I'm a little Cpat echo! enjoyed this a lot! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wishing for one of those nights..Beautiful Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - Victoria, I really like this! I hope that Marge gets to read this - she will love it  Melissa~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your poetry makes such a soft and romantic display of the moon in comparing it to a flower in bloom. Lovely image. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
One can almost see the petals falling away and down.... a lovely visual, Victoria... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful and very nice writing!!! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ 'The moon is a blossom tonight blooming tenderly golden petals drift in the breeze blushing with romance' I do soooooooo enjoy the poetic allure of the moon~ Just adore the idea of her 'blushing'. Might have to add that thought to my 'moonies' !  This is great ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you all so very much..i love writing about the moon..it is always an inspiration when everything else fails haa...hugss ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely ~V~ very tender thoughts huggssssss M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Such a soft, gentle, tender write! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This piece of writing was dripping with romance and I loved every word........Sue Suetang |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Victoria, this is really beautiful, it moved me so much as I read the words I felt what you were trying to say! Thank you for this. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Maureen, Sue, Eddie, and Kathleen..nice to hear from all of you..hugs ~Victoria~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Victoria...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - I am touched by your writing 'Touched by a Moonflower, but also have been touched by a Moonbeam... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you james and bill..delighted to hear from you both .. glad you peeked in~Victoria~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Ooh...wonderfully sensual write, as usual, Victoria...I truly enjoyed this...great work! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Such fragrant ease desires breeze you please. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you snowpants and RS..thank you for peeking in..always nice hearing from you both.. ~Victoria~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Victoria- WOW...this is wonderful! So soft and romantic is this render.. I love it..  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Vicky..nice to hear from you hugs ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Victoria, So many lovely lines here. Very, very pretty. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So soft and sensual, and I can picture a young woman reciting this to her lover in evening's shadows of the moon. Beautiful! ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you whispers caress and mysteria..nice of you to peek in.. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Whisper's Caress and Mysteria, so nice of you both to peek in..glad you enjoyed. ~Victoria~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shed light and magic across these pages, this sings with enchantment! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your love forever touch you with spring! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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