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Ms. Butterfly
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Ms. Butterfly |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
~*~ Ms. Butterfly~*~ Exquisite fragile wings of beauty, flitter over here, enlighten me, show me how to fly so high ~ with elegance. I'm captivated by your loveliness with an air of gentleness you add to this earth, a touch ~ of radiance. Could I fly with you when you go to the very end of the rainbow, where peacefulness can be felt ~ in a glance? ~*~ 'My earthly friend in your confusion, what you are seeing is an elusion ~ a happenstance. I'm just like you on the inside where I so often go to hide sadness, suppressed ~ in a trance. If my luminescent appearance brings you joy in abundance, my rainbow job on earth is done ~ join in the dance.' [This message has been edited by Flutterwings (edited 07-17-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... especially liked the next to last verse.. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Maggie - so pretty!  Here are some for you to go with your lovely verse. There is no one writes butterflies like "Flutterwings". Lovely, as usual, Maggie you warmed my heart this morning as always.  Love, Sharon ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance, I hope you dance ~ |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Cpat ~ Thanks for the comment! You've made me very  Mysteria,  Yu are an  and I thank you for the baby Butterfly gifs....  ((~.~)) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
so wonderfully delicate and floating. . . you give that idea that you yourself are just here until you can spread those wings. . . wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Sven ~ Thanks The freedom of the butterfly is so much, what I think, everyone is looking for. The butterfly never becomes beautiful right away... She has to work hard to create her existance. After a lot of hard work and patience she breaks free of her cacoon. Thanks for reading.... ((~.~)) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
quite quite fine, but this stanza...exquisite! If my luminescent appearance brings you joy in abundance, my rainbow job on earth is done ~ join in the dance. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FlutterWings~ Ohhhhhhh, how very, very pretty is this. I'm so pleased that you have joined our friendship bouquet with your sweet fluttering~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Thanks Marge ~ Butterflys always hover around beautiful things ~.~ That is why I fluttered here; I could feel the love and ambiance. ((~.~)) |
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