Open Poetry #15 |
Let's Dance......... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
let the music play let the rhythm flow let the beat bump.... let yourself go dance.... give it a shake come on let's play whatcha got? shake it this way...... sweat..... out on the dance floor I want to see you move feel the music baby let's groove..... jam.... the night is young this music ~ tight come on baby dance with me tonight....... ~SEA~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(laughing) You know I don't dance.... Wonderful poem SEA.. the flow takes the reader into the music which is behind it... hmmm... more a dance I understand here perhaps.. Clap slap Feet fall In rhythm Old words Chanted Meaning Long gone Paint placed Face first In patterns of Great guile Stalking silently Hidden Meanings Sweat dropped Memory Remains |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh I bet you could shake it pretty good if you really wanted to thanks |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
great rhythm, you've got the groove, Baby! you're rockin' I've been an armchair dancer, now for 18 years, save one dance with my daughter at her wedding now she dances for exercise I hate exercise heh heh heh but I loved this dance with you, SEA! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehe what a fun poem! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Hi SEA, I'm not a dancer eather but if any poem can get me of the wall and out on the floor this one could. Great write!!! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Shake that little booty, gal ! You tickle me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I can always tell when its Friday... Sea-girlie is shaking her poetic booty LOL boogie-on baby bet I can guess what music is playing later-bumpandgrind-gator Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
VAS~ thank you SmittenKitten~ thanks Shadow~ well, come on then......dance Marge~ I love to shake my groove thing glad to tickle.... Janet~ oh yeah! It's soooooo Friday..... and the music is loud!! ( have you heard 112~ Peaches and Cream? if not listen...it's fantastic!!! ) boogie on baby! ~SEA |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Upbeat, humerous, and visually charming..... I enjoyed watching you two carry on. A most delightful poem. -Bob |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I love "fun" poems and this one is certainly that. It's Friday, dance the night away. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe you will get your desire...James |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
pencil me in on your dance card. great up-lift write Sea, and i do like to dance. It's the next morning headache... Oh that don't have nothing to do with dancing, that had something to do with what you drank. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
SEA In the mood tonight, to dance and dance away Till the hours beacon and night it turns to day. Enjoyed your read, hope you enjoyed the dance. Rick |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
Nice Poem.................... But Sea! i don't know how to dance........ Believe me .................i cann't do...... |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
You sure do have the moves SEA. Thanks foor the dance! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is a fun Poem.... I love to dance Thank You ~~~Connie~~~ [This message has been edited by Zinsser (edited 07-16-2001).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh,loved this I love to dance. Nice write here. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I almost misssed this but I didn't Got my toe tappin' there, gal |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Picked up & carried with thrill, happily read. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Dancing in my chair..Ah I wish I had someone to go out dancing with, I love to dance..Its almost as good as..well, you know.. Sandra |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
I'll meet you at the club closest to halfway SEA... It'll be fun!! ;D Nice poem, too lol Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
the night is young....the music tight.. two of my favorite adjectives, SEA nicely done |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wonderfully written, full of feeling and of course, rhythm! Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This was such a fun poem. I love to dance..even though I have no rhythm. This was really fun. ~Susie ~*~Born to Blossom and Bloom to Perish~*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey SEA! you and prince jammin without me?? lol this is a cute one..keep groovin! hugs, g "sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.." -demi moore |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
OKAY, second time around and still gr8! dance the night away look forward to early morn anticipation |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
let's dance!!!!!!! ,sea,one of your best poem i've read |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much music is always on at my house......one of us is usually groovin and nine times out of ten it's Prince groovin us along.....I do listen to other music, I just prefer his LOL thank you again "Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt." |
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