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Open Poetry #15

a thought, to think of

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-09-19 04:41 PM

The summer breeze, the autumn sky
a whisp of smoke across my eyes
lazily I listen to nothingness

'twas a time to recall the moments of past
a time when I thought happyness would last
It faded as the sun bedded down for the night
it faded to a distant, dim light

Of all the the thoughts I hold
and all the stories I have told
lies inside, my thoughts reside
in me

Many things have happened
many borders crossed in hope of a world
that welcomes my being
alas my quest with no end is endless
in its entirity

Ponder yes, a future? maybe so
time? relentlessly ticks its tock
racing to demise, a date not fixed
in my mind.
Richy

FireDancer123
Junior Member

since 2001-06-14

Posts 43
Virginia

1 posted 2001-09-19 08:28 PM

*The summer breeze, the autumn sky
a whisp of smoke across my eyes*

Great opening lines. I know the feeling well and hope you find your happiness again.. and somehow stop watching the clock as much. It won't speed up at your own will.

But that was beautiful. It flowed nicely and had great imagery. Write forever..
*barefeet&greengrass&peace*

"If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz
"Eat drink and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Dave Matthews

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