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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-07-17 09:50 AM

Connected

touch
newness yet familiar
in it’s intimate
pleasure

connected
to a moment
and forever
amazing this
treasure

soothing me
in ways you
don’t even
understand

so unexpected
not at all
what I had
planned

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-17 09:59 AM

Lovely write.... as usual.. I enjoyed a great deal...

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2001-07-17 10:24 AM

1slick_lady,

Wonderfully written

"soothing me
in ways you
don’t even
understand"

I understand these lines so well..

You read my thoughts about my love.

TaraB

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2001-07-17 11:21 AM

Wonderful ending.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-07-17 01:19 PM

superb
and yes
a wonderful ending!

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

5 posted 2001-07-17 02:19 PM

Glad to see you back AND connected

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

6 posted 2001-07-17 03:18 PM

Very beautiful! I love this!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-07-17 03:31 PM

I like this one.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

8 posted 2001-07-17 04:18 PM

Ohh..It NEVER is what we expect. I love the way your writing trickles down my imagination.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

9 posted 2001-07-17 06:01 PM

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Touch
Newness yet familiar
In its intimate
Pleasure
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Connection!!!!
Good Job

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-07-17 07:00 PM

it never is is it?

love this one helen. . . you are indeed the queen of the thought. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

11 posted 2001-07-17 07:02 PM

love it when things don't go as planned....sometimes

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

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