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NightShadow
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0 posted 2001-09-18 10:25 AM


There was a lonely star
shining up above
It sparkled from afar
and was white as a dove
The star kept getting brighter
the lonelier that it got
and one day
it turned into a dot!
It disappeared from view
and the next thing you knew
there were hundreds of
bright shining stars
up in the nights sky.

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

© Copyright 2001 Sarah Jeffers - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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1 posted 2001-09-18 10:53 AM


and they all twinkle for you, poetess...
DreamRomancer
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2 posted 2001-09-18 11:00 AM


And with poetess' such as yourself, the night sky will never shine less bright!

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

NightShadow
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3 posted 2001-09-18 11:05 AM


Thank you.. both very much!

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

Charisma
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4 posted 2001-09-18 03:30 PM


I love it when there are much of stars above.

Thank you for sharing

Charisma

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5 posted 2001-09-18 07:17 PM


I love the stars. . .

this one flowed very well. . . wonderful image. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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