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Open Poetry #15

The Star

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

0 posted 2001-09-18 10:25 AM

There was a lonely star
shining up above
It sparkled from afar
and was white as a dove
The star kept getting brighter
the lonelier that it got
and one day
it turned into a dot!
It disappeared from view
and the next thing you knew
there were hundreds of
bright shining stars
up in the nights sky.

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

1 posted 2001-09-18 10:53 AM

and they all twinkle for you, poetess...

DreamRomancer
Junior Member

since 2001-09-18

Posts 46
Ohio, United States

2 posted 2001-09-18 11:00 AM

And with poetess' such as yourself, the night sky will never shine less bright!

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

3 posted 2001-09-18 11:05 AM

Thank you.. both very much!

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-09-18 03:30 PM

I love it when there are much of stars above.

Thank you for sharing

Charisma

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-09-18 07:17 PM

I love the stars. . .

this one flowed very well. . . wonderful image. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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