Open Poetry #15 |
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I want my world back |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I want my world back it wasn’t perfect far from it but relative to this it seemed Eden I want my greatest fear to still be that my girlfriend would wreck my red convertible I want to be trivial and naïve, again without thought to character or motive sleeping in my sense of false security without need of soporific I want to write of loves moments before it felt selfish to speak of anything but loss and tragedy I want the sports I never watch to play all weekend the new fall series I’m never home to see I even miss commercials every 10 minutes there’s not anything about the day the same I want my world back it wasn’t perfect but I recognized it each morning I woke up Now, I open my eyes remembering words my grandmother often spoke ‘I won’t see it in my lifetime but you likely will in yours’ and if for nothing else I am grateful that she’s high above it all I want my world back |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Wish our children could be above and beyond it all. Good poem. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ Oh, God yes ... ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
it wasn’t perfect but I recognized it... Me too. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Duncan so do I but hon I'm afraid our world is never going to be the same. It's been changed forever. Duncan your heartache is so evident in this and I hate that young people should have to feel this pain. ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((warm hugs))) Wish I was able to give back your and mine world. Because these tragedy will affect many many lifes all over the world. Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, It hasn't left yet but it's getting close. Enjoyed the write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well said Duncan. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You said what alot of us are feeling. Unfortunatly things will never be quite the same as before. We will emerge stronger and better equipped to reconize our enemies. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Agreed - "This land was made for you and me" We want it back. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Duncan..I'm sure these are the thoughts of many... hugs, you've said it well. K |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Duncan, naive is a good thing..I want the same..it will happen and, hopefully, in our lifetime ![]() |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
Duncan, thanks for expressing so well what is in the minds of many these days. This is my wish too...the wish to have back even one of the pauses in time it takes for "station identification"... This poem gets me, right *here*. When words cannot bear the burden of thought, it is the poet who lends them strength, hoisting the thoughts within reach of us all. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's after midnight here, and I too want the world to go back a week. But I know we can't go anywhere but forward, we can't even stand still long enough to let it all sink in. But if we could go back, I would want to leave out several elements ...intolerance, greed, injustice, cruelty, poverty etc. And then we could go forward in peace and harmony, with every child having fun playing games, with lovers holding hands, and even music blasting too loudly from my neighbors car radio. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I want my world back" You've spoken many of our thoughts in this piece Duncan, well penned and highly emotive. Best wishes, /Kit |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This touched my heart Duncan. I want it back too. Like a missing child! But we must treat it with love and patience. For it will have to heal....and trust again. Thank you for sharing. Sincerely, Regina |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Took my mom by surprize she thought she wouldn't see it in her lifetime. I want my world back. But somehow perhaps now our world could be better, at least we could appreciate things more because our eyes have been opened. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah... very nicely done Duncan...and I think we are faced with a great many challenges ahead that will make us perhaps want our old world back even more... grab a hand..and hold on... we are all in this thing together and all face the uncertainty of tomorrow....but... we WILL make it..and we will do it together! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Me too Duncan. Me too. If only wishing could bring it back If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
The past couple of weeks have been a tumultous time. I just pray that the healing and rebuilding will create a better world for all of us to share and appreciate. Very well done Duncan! |
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DreamRomancer Junior Member
since 2001-09-18
Posts 46Ohio, United States |
To return to such a time would be greatly desired, but alas we must forge ahead as one and overcome! With my pen I shall create, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is good. I want my world back, too. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
So do I, Duncan, I want that "believing" spirit and freshness I once had. Thank you for this. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Had to bump this one forward. Duncan, maybe your grandmother was referring to peace? and not constant suffering and devastation? |
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