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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-09-16 07:15 PM


You are the brightness of the sun
That lightens my day
You are the glow of the moon
That shines my way

You are the cool, crisp wind
That flows upon my face
You are the much needed warmth
That my arms embrace

You are the beauty of nature
the birds, trees, and stars
You are the blazing fire
That continues to burn in my heart

You are without doubt, my true love
This is not infatuation
You are the cause of my happiness
Everday is a reason to engage in celebration

© Copyright 2001 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-09-16 08:22 PM


a testament that love will always be. . .

wonderful my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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2 posted 2001-09-16 09:04 PM


Very nice.  Nice to find a love poem again, in the midst of our disaster.  Joyce
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-09-16 09:17 PM


Just what we all need right now....a little love in our hearts.  Well done.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2001-09-16 10:24 PM


One can't help but smile after reading a verse such as this.  

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Masked Intruder
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5 posted 2001-09-16 11:09 PM


*Grins*  Finally, a poem that doesn't make me depressed!  Write on Joanna!
Daniel J D
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6 posted 2001-09-16 11:12 PM


RosePetal,
This is very beautiful. Your work is just great.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-09-17 04:53 AM


A nice position to be in...James
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8 posted 2001-09-17 05:39 AM


such a wonderful poem  
GhostWriter_6
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9 posted 2001-09-17 06:57 AM


Very Warm And Touching Poem.......
you are a very talented poet..
keep it up

1Love
GhostWriter_6

Domzi
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10 posted 2001-09-17 04:27 PM


Something that I needed to read...something about love...I'm feeling this poem...you have skills that I'm glad you share.

Much Love- Dominique

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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
11 posted 2001-09-17 04:34 PM




A beautiful heartfelt outpouring of the heart....

Lovely.....

Thank you
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RosePetal
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12 posted 2001-09-17 08:12 PM


Hello friends..

Thank you all for replying, I'm glad you enjoyed this. I figured I'd put a little love out there for all of you!

<3 RP

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