Open Poetry #15 |
You Are... |
RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
You are the brightness of the sun That lightens my day You are the glow of the moon That shines my way You are the cool, crisp wind That flows upon my face You are the much needed warmth That my arms embrace You are the beauty of nature the birds, trees, and stars You are the blazing fire That continues to burn in my heart You are without doubt, my true love This is not infatuation You are the cause of my happiness Everday is a reason to engage in celebration |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a testament that love will always be. . . wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice. Nice to find a love poem again, in the midst of our disaster. Joyce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just what we all need right now....a little love in our hearts. Well done. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
One can't help but smile after reading a verse such as this. "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
*Grins* Finally, a poem that doesn't make me depressed! Write on Joanna! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
RosePetal, This is very beautiful. Your work is just great. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice position to be in...James |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
such a wonderful poem |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
Very Warm And Touching Poem....... you are a very talented poet.. keep it up 1Love GhostWriter_6 |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Something that I needed to read...something about love...I'm feeling this poem...you have skills that I'm glad you share. Much Love- Dominique |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A beautiful heartfelt outpouring of the heart.... Lovely..... Thank you ************************* |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hello friends.. Thank you all for replying, I'm glad you enjoyed this. I figured I'd put a little love out there for all of you! <3 RP |
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