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Open Poetry #15

Raging Fires....a senryu

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

0 posted 2001-09-13 11:46 PM

The fires are burning
In the raging souls of life
Love is a soulmate

Cpalmer

In memory of the tragedy in our great country...let's all keep the love in our hearts...

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-14 02:12 AM

Cindi~
Just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-09-14 05:02 AM

Very nice poem, Cindi.
I enjoyed reading it.

Thanks for sharing it.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

Bilby
Junior Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 14
Northern Territory, Australia

3 posted 2001-09-14 05:43 AM

I'd be wary of using a repeated word, ie. soul, in such short forms of poetry as it tends to be overly dominant while reducing the scarce resources available to convey meaning.
cheers,
Alan

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

4 posted 2001-09-16 04:07 PM

Marge,
Thanks so much!
Love ya
Cindi

Anonymous,
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks
Cindi

Bilby,
Thank you for your input, I had not looked at it that way...Thanks
Cindi

Kirksters
Junior Member

since 2001-07-01

Posts 47

5 posted 2001-09-17 01:48 PM

Nice poem Cindi, Love is everything

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

6 posted 2001-09-17 02:38 PM

Kirksters,
Thank you....isn't love great!
LYL
Cindi

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

7 posted 2001-09-17 04:47 PM

"Love is a soulmate"

Indeed.......I felt a tug at my heart reading this line....

Short and powerful....

Thank you
************************

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

8 posted 2001-09-17 08:19 PM

Melody,
Thank you...I felt it very powerful when it came into my head, I had to write it down...I'm glad you like it!
Cindi

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