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Dance Floor For Two
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Dance Floor For Two |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Dance Floor For Two~ tender your gentle heart hold me in love's embrace kiss me once, then kiss me again let's dance to the rhythm of beating hearts on candlelit dance floor for two we'll sleep bathed in moonglow wake with a kiss tender ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
tender indeed... nicely done |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Awright! Tenderly done  |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Very nice, this is the poem dreams are made of. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How very romantic...lovely! |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Girl! I love it!!! Incredibly gentle and tenderly seductive! Very nice job!!! mua Dance like nobody is watching |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vlraynes, Such pretty thoughts, enjoyed. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
awwwwwww, bathed in moonglow that is a loveliest of images! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Love romantic poems, and this one is a keeper. Hugs, Deb |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Vicky this is exactly the way the perfect romantic evening should be. Lovely image Sandra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very tender picture you painted, enjoyed. ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance, I hope you dance ~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cpat- Thank you..glad you like. Interloper- Glad you enjoyed..thanks for reading. Kirksters- Ahhh...do you know how big I'm smiling right now?  Thanks so much...I'm really glad you like it. Martie- Thanks so much for reading...really happy you enjoyed this. Thanks for the 'lovely!' Tanya- Seductive, huh? I like that..LOL Thanks for reading, sweets... Glad you like it. Seymour- Thank you so much for reading. I'm so happy to know you enjoyed this. VAS- I love the thought of that too.. Glad you enjoyed.. Deb- So nice to see your name here.. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you, my friend. Sandra- I think so too... Thanks so much for the kind words.. Sharon- Thank you, sweet friend... I'm glad you enjoyed.. hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Danced the night away, did you ?  This is a stunning rictameter ! Not the easiest form to pull off successfully, yet you do it with class ! Magnifique~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Bravo! This is a lovely piece WEll done! Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"We'll sleep bathed in moonglow." I like this poem...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOOHOO!  look at tricks getting all romantic and stuff! good job tricks! i like i like! hugs, g "sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.." -demi moore |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Ah yes...and a lovely night it was... Thanks much, my friend. Glad you found it Magnifique~.. Love you, sweet lady.. Liz- Well, hello sweet lady! So good to find your name here... happy you enjoyed. Thank you! James- Thanks so much..glad you like! dg- LOL...yep...once in awhile I have to stretch my wings and try a little fiction..LOL Glad you enjoyed this one! Love and hugs and stuff!! hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky, How romantic! My dream for sure! I love this one! hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
For two?????????? Hey now ... is that any way to hold a party? How about for about 45 of your closest friends. Ohhhhhhhh... I get it........yeppers......then two it should be. Wonderful write my friend. Nice to see you back among the poetic clan. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wait 'til I get my dancing shoes on ... LOVED it! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
cindi- What can i say...i'm just a hopeless romantic..LOL Glad you enjoyed.. Mark- Can it be? Do my eyes deceive me??? Is that a cowboy I see waltzing across the dance floor? Great to see you back, my sweet friend.. Been saving a dance for you...you've been missed.. Thanks for the kind words, my friend. Interloper- Hurry up and get those shoes on before the music stops..LOL. Really glad you enjoyed this one.. hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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