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Open Poetry #15

Lovin' U

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-09-15 11:54 PM

Lovin’ U
For lovin’ me
I love you for the way you
Make me feel
When I am with you
Lovin’ U
For setting my heart free
I love you for breaking the chains
To the doorway to my heart
For now I can feel the warmth of passion
Of our love running through my veins
You have made my dark world fall apart
Filling my life with compassion
Lovin’ U
For wanting me
Wanting you
For I have never felt the way
I do when I am with you
Please tell me that you will in my life stay
Needing you
Hoping that you really need me
For needing me
I have never needed anyone the way I need you
So here I sit just
Lovin’ U
For making me feel the power
Of true love

© alan aka icyheart
Sept.15, 2001

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

1 posted 2001-09-16 04:15 PM

I never thought that love could ever come my way. Now that I've been hit by Cupid's arrow I don't ever want the feeling to go away.
Thanks for your heartfelt poem.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

2 posted 2001-09-16 04:48 PM

very well written, it reads rather smoothly and the content is excellent! i believe we have to thank the women who stand by their men through the beginning stages of this breaking away of chains. so THANKS women! well done.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-09-16 09:01 PM

Oh yes Alan...very nicely done indeed! Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

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