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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas 
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Fragments Sitting so quiet next to the noise you make inside my mind and my soul, I can’t deny it, my heart starts to quake when you look at me as if you know. You speak, joke and laugh, touch my knee with your hand; the words go in out my ears. The hope of your love is like washing the sand off of the beach of my fears. What is this stigma which shames me to silence? Why do I keep myself shy? Is it some hidden fragment of the last broken romance which pains every move that I try? |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
this timid characteristic could be an attraction, like the words in your poem. your feelings are very well expressed and the words flow nicely!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hold onto that feeling of love, but also share it freely. We need all the love we can get floating around out here this week. |
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