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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Fears Here I am among feelings mixed through tragedy sorrow Colors of national pride awaken by Tears of innocent Here I am among blue lines scared for tomorrow Fears frighten my soul awaken by menace of war Charisma ~*TMP*~ |
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Pip Member
since 2001-09-14
Posts 59 |
Excellent form, m'lady! Eloquence favors you well. -Pip |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Very beautiful Charisma, thank you Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A wise person fears when there is a need but that will not stop us. Joyce |
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shawana Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 14 |
"Constructive Critiques"....huh?? hmmmm....alright! Just let it be known that you are a very dear lady, one couldn't ask for a better friend than you! What you put here in words is merely a drop of your sweet soul & character! Keep up with this gift you have ... you've never have let me down sofar..;-) as we have a saying: 'djempol'... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very well said.... and while we all have fears..we can not let those stop us from doing what we know has to be done... Good stufff!!! |
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