Morning Tears..........Tanka

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Charisma

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lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-09-14 04:58 PM

Morning Tears

Innocent and pure
Morning tears on white petals
guard of thorns around
protect shield of inner core
sight of peaceable glory

Charisma
~*TMP*~
14/09/01

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 09-14-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-09-14 05:07 PM

Charisma,
Well said. Enjoyed

Sunshine

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2 posted 2001-09-14 05:18 PM

What a beautiful sentiment!

Nan

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3 posted 2001-09-14 06:00 PM

Very nice, Charisma..

Balladeer

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4 posted 2001-09-14 10:04 PM

Exquisite, Charisma....thank you

Mysteria

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5 posted 2001-09-14 10:55 PM

Absolutely beautiful Charisma.

~*Be Kind To Your Fellow Man, Lend Him A Helping Hand, Put A Little Love In Your Heart*~

Marge Tindal

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6 posted 2001-09-14 11:39 PM

OhDearestCharisma~
How exquisitely symbolic of the innocence
that was covered in our tears~

This is delicately compassionate~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

rwood
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7 posted 2001-09-15 07:41 AM

How tender and yet strong this represents. Thank you so much for your beautiful sentiments.

Sincerely,
Regina

vandana

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8 posted 2001-09-15 12:49 PM

thank you for this

2dalimit
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9 posted 2001-09-17 07:53 AM

Outstanding!

Melton

Charisma

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10 posted 2001-09-17 08:46 AM

Thank you all for the read, as my heart is still with you in these days of grief.

Charisma

shawana
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since 2000-11-02

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11 posted 2001-09-18 08:49 AM

waterdrops as tears on the petals....
just remarkable!
...but then so are you!!

Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2001-09-18 01:52 PM

This is so beautiful Charisma, good image

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

The Lady of Shallot
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13 posted 2001-10-13 01:16 PM

fresh and pure!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-02-08 11:05 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) Such innocent laughter and tears fill your poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

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15 posted 2002-02-14 09:29 PM

beautiful tanka as always!

passing shadows
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16 posted 2003-01-12 05:04 AM

gorgeous!

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