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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-09-14 04:58 PM




Morning Tears

Innocent and pure
Morning tears on white  petals
guard of thorns around
protect shield of inner core
sight of peaceable glory




Charisma
~*TMP*~
14/09/01


[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 09-14-2001).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-09-14 05:07 PM


Charisma,
Well said. Enjoyed

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2 posted 2001-09-14 05:18 PM



What a beautiful sentiment!

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3 posted 2001-09-14 06:00 PM


Very nice, Charisma..

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4 posted 2001-09-14 10:04 PM


Exquisite, Charisma....thank you  
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5 posted 2001-09-14 10:55 PM


Absolutely beautiful Charisma.

~*Be Kind To Your Fellow Man, Lend Him A Helping Hand, Put A Little Love In Your Heart*~

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6 posted 2001-09-14 11:39 PM


OhDearestCharisma~
How exquisitely symbolic of the innocence
that was covered in our tears~

This is delicately compassionate~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-09-15 07:41 AM


How tender and yet strong this represents. Thank you so much for your beautiful sentiments.

Sincerely,
Regina

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8 posted 2001-09-15 12:49 PM


thank you for this
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9 posted 2001-09-17 07:53 AM


Outstanding!

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10 posted 2001-09-17 08:46 AM


Thank you all for the read, as my heart is still with you in these days of grief.

Charisma

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11 posted 2001-09-18 08:49 AM



waterdrops as tears on the petals....
just remarkable!
...but then so are you!!

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12 posted 2001-09-18 01:52 PM


This is so beautiful Charisma, good image

Titia

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13 posted 2001-10-13 01:16 PM


fresh and pure!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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14 posted 2002-02-08 11:05 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) Such innocent laughter and tears fill your poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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15 posted 2002-02-14 09:29 PM


beautiful tanka as always!
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gorgeous!
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