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juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-09-14 03:04 PM


Tears downwards roll
      When
I miss ur tender hold
the small loving smile
when loving feelings tond

Baby I miss ur sweet kindness
the wings of love
that sheltered me from darkness

I miss ur suporting words
the F and the L
that got me sad mad
but helded me before I fell

It's hard to face this life
with trace of cutting knives
its hard to loose an angel
when this heart is barelly live

I'll soon will stop the writing
I'll soon might stop the bugging
just know my love was true
as long as I am living
and my soul was still breathing

LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE  JUAN PABLO

© Copyright 2001 juan pablo rodriguez - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2001-09-14 05:56 PM


You were fortunate to have such a love. Hold it dearly close to your heart...
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-09-15 03:59 PM


A time to hold on and a time to let go...I went through these same feelings and it is not easy to let go but it is necessary...the priority now is you are the dad...James
Domzi
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since 2001-09-08
Posts 288
New York (BK)
3 posted 2001-09-15 04:25 PM


Everyone wishes for this kind of love. A lovely poem...keep your head up.

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