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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-09-14 09:25 AM


Day break
filled the blue canvas
with streams of blood red lines

Portending,perhaps,
the remnants to be found
and the hopes of some shattered

But it was day break
another chance for the living
to see there is still beauty


still love


Day has broken,
but we are not


© Copyright 2001 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-09-14 09:27 AM



Day has broken
but we are not!

Thank you for this!

Charisma
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2 posted 2001-09-14 09:37 AM


Well said

charisma

Zinsser
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3 posted 2001-09-14 10:38 AM


No , were not broken.....
~Connie~

Duncan
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4 posted 2001-09-14 11:09 AM


Exactly.
Nan
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5 posted 2001-09-14 11:15 AM


Indeed - We are not...

Alan
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right next door
6 posted 2001-09-14 11:17 AM


I totally agree.
RSWells
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7 posted 2001-09-14 08:26 PM


Not only not broken but unbowed.
rwood
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8 posted 2001-09-15 07:16 AM


Perfect C. Thank you so much. Hugs to you and your.

Sincerely,
Regina

redheart angrybraids
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9 posted 2001-09-15 07:37 AM


yes truly writen, kindly.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2001-09-18 06:32 PM


Amen my friend, Amen.
Pell
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11 posted 2001-09-18 06:45 PM


Wonderful words of healing and hope, determination and strength. Our spirit is bruised, but not defeated.

Pell

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2001-09-24 04:03 PM


Nice words Cpat...James
DreamRomancer
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13 posted 2001-09-24 04:51 PM


Good write CPat.  May we never be bent or broken!!!!!

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

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