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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-09-14 01:41 AM


If it was a perfect world
Everyone would get along
We'd show respect toward one another
Even apologize when we're wrong

If it was a perfect world
We'd remember to kiss loved ones goodnight
But we rarely see the importance of it
Until they are taken out of sight

If it was a perfect world
We wouldn't know what its like to be sad
Live life to the fullest
It might be the last day you have

It would be a perfect world
If only we all could see eye to eye
It'll never happen though
Since some rode in on a horse so high

Nevermind them, I have you, my true friends
We share a genuine appreciation for life
Thus, we've flourished into a circle
Of friendship with our hands clasped tight

So even if the world will never be peferct
It gives us more of a reason to strive
We are more than friends, we are family
No matter what obstacle is hurled at us
WE WILL SURVIVE!

© Copyright 2001 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-14 02:07 AM


RosePetal~
With compassionate feelings toward one another
we'd sure be a lot closer to perfect than we are today~

Thank you for your thoughts.
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2001-09-14 02:33 AM


totally true.. if it were a perfect world plenty of things that occur on this earth would be eliminated... but people shoul dnot take their lives for granted.. spend time with ya kids.. go see ya family.. and enjoy the small things in life that make it all come together...

1love,

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3 posted 2001-09-14 08:44 AM


good write straith from the heart. Thank you for sharing.

((hugs))
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4 posted 2002-02-08 11:42 PM




(sigh) Oooooohhhh...this is sooooooo very true, sweet friend, this may not be Utopia, but we are all here for each other and with the spirit of friendship and love in our hearts, as long as we believe in ourselves, we can bring harmony to others and soon to the whole world! (kiss on lips) I love you so much, sweet friend, you always make my world seem so happy and heavenly! You have such a beautiful heart, my Guinevere, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-02-14 09:20 PM


((hugs)) thanks so much hunnie
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