Open Poetry #15 |
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No Perfect World |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida ![]() |
If it was a perfect world Everyone would get along We'd show respect toward one another Even apologize when we're wrong If it was a perfect world We'd remember to kiss loved ones goodnight But we rarely see the importance of it Until they are taken out of sight If it was a perfect world We wouldn't know what its like to be sad Live life to the fullest It might be the last day you have It would be a perfect world If only we all could see eye to eye It'll never happen though Since some rode in on a horse so high Nevermind them, I have you, my true friends We share a genuine appreciation for life Thus, we've flourished into a circle Of friendship with our hands clasped tight So even if the world will never be peferct It gives us more of a reason to strive We are more than friends, we are family No matter what obstacle is hurled at us WE WILL SURVIVE! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetal~ With compassionate feelings toward one another we'd sure be a lot closer to perfect than we are today~ Thank you for your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
totally true.. if it were a perfect world plenty of things that occur on this earth would be eliminated... but people shoul dnot take their lives for granted.. spend time with ya kids.. go see ya family.. and enjoy the small things in life that make it all come together... 1love, GhostWriter_6 |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
good write straith from the heart. Thank you for sharing. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Oooooohhhh...this is sooooooo very true, sweet friend, this may not be Utopia, but we are all here for each other and with the spirit of friendship and love in our hearts, as long as we believe in ourselves, we can bring harmony to others and soon to the whole world! (kiss on lips) I love you so much, sweet friend, you always make my world seem so happy and heavenly! You have such a beautiful heart, my Guinevere, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
((hugs)) thanks so much hunnie |
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