Open Poetry #15 |
Red White And Oh So Blue |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Red White And Oh So Blue ~*Marge Tindal*~ Drip of red 'cross morning sky White of face in shocked deny Blue, oh so blue we cry Red of dread in heart does lay Ghastly white gives emotions away Blue, oh so blue - now we pray Red come red in tear-stained eye White come light in soft goodbye Blue, oh so blue - American blood runs true United hearts of stripes and stars These colors wave in unity's furl We may weep before it's done But remember this ... These colors don't run ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
They sure don't! Fantastic presentation Marge, and a wonderfully patriotic message. ~*Be Kind To Your Fellow Man, Lend Him A Helping Hand, Put A Little Love In Your Heart*~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Marge this is so wonderfully written *hugs* Absolutely beautiful Im red with anger white with disbelief and oh so blue with meloncholy |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
red, white, and blue....we ARE true to you !!!helen |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
By Gosh I think Marge is ready to put uniform on...and so are the rest of us...Go Marge...This is the spirit that will carry is through and win our cause. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you for your very wise words, dear Marge.. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Wonderful poem.. We stand united.. the flag a symbol of who we are and what we stand for. Enjoyed this poem very much. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you present the spirit of America here very well. Great write my dear friend. (((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Indeed. Several in our office are decked out in the primary colors...Please, all remember, that today we come together as one in memoriam - then please, GO FORWARD AS ONE FOR THE DURATION, and then some! |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Terrorism is suppost to generate fear and despair. Bin Laden has been robbed of his victory. His unspeakable crimes have ignited a powerfull resolve of all Americans and hopefully the world. Terrorist must be shown once and for all their actions will no longer be tolorated. There will be no place for them to hide. Any country that harbors or supports them will be held accountable for their actions. I hope he has written his death warrant with his acts.God bless America. It is time to take out the garbage. paladin [This message has been edited by paladin (edited 09-14-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A touching and powerful tribute Faith, strength and hope will prevail!~ Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I'm wearing a flag drapped shirt..."Proud to be an American" written on it...and up and down the streets of our town, flags are flying, on flag poles, on cars ...stuck in planters and on doors. Every tree has a yellow ribbon, thanks to my husband. The spirit is alive and well, and you have written it in this poem. Thanks and love! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"the colors don't run!" wonderful!! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yellow we are not! Still so blue, and red with anger, and relentlessly searching for the white light of hope. Much love and appreciation for this and for your continued spirit. Sincerely, Regina |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
color me your greatest fan, dear Marge....this is great :thumbsup" |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Thank you Marge. United we stand! Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Marge, I loved this very much! This was excellent!! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I am proud to be an American! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Oh well done! That last line says it all! We won't run from this monumental tragedy and we'll overcome the blow to our country and our people! Betty Lou Hebert |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Though I may be slow in jumping on this one, believe me when I say, I love it! "United hearts of stripes and stars These colors wave in unity's furl We may weep before it's done But remember this ... These colors don't run !" This says it all, my friend! Your words have touched me tonight. Love you, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
From heart to broken heart - I hold this truth to be - the United States Of America - is home, sweet home to me I will keep her first in respect - for what she's given me - Love of this country ever burns - in faithful service of dignity Upon the shoulders of her boulders - she brings forth in unity - Ever-bending, never-ending - love, faith and loyalty *God bless America* Bless you all ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
You are right, THESE COLORS DO NOT RUN |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Marge, thanks again. May your waving words of strength and resolve send giant LOVE flags all across the planet. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
God Bless America, and God Bless you Marge! I hope this poem will be read by many. It's awesome. Hugs, Deb |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
A good back drop to the Poem and All the post here would be Good old Bruce singing "Born In The USA" |
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