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with you

0 posted 2001-09-13 09:48 PM


And at the end of the day
my mind rewinds
and replays
the time I spent with you
giving me a smile
as I lay me down
and reflect a while
recalling what
you said to me
etching softly
in my memory
reminding me
there is no forever
not the perfect kind
but there are those times
that feel perfect
that you know
will stay in your heart
while you erase the rest…………


~SEA~




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1 posted 2001-09-13 09:54 PM


Susan, I really needed to read something like this today, it was lovely:
... there is no forever
not the perfect kind
but there are those times
that feel perfect ...      Thank you!

~*Be Kind To Your Fellow Man, Lend Him A Helping Hand, Put A Little Love In Your Heart*~

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2 posted 2001-09-13 10:05 PM


You have blended two realities and this is the first time I have felt comfortable responding to anything other that pure tragedy.  (Though Balladeer's middle finger post was a definite turning point).  Thank you, SEA.
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3 posted 2001-09-13 10:06 PM


Very beautiful, SEA. Lovely.
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-09-13 10:08 PM


Beautiful.

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5 posted 2001-09-13 10:46 PM


a perfect time to read this, SEA. At times like this we pull up those "perfect moments and memories" and they help to get us through..you are wonderful  
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6 posted 2001-09-13 11:06 PM


thank you friends  
and Balladeer, so are you  

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7 posted 2001-09-16 02:07 PM


Very nice Sea...James
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8 posted 2001-09-16 02:14 PM


and to hold them close. . . and dream. . .

well done my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 2001-09-16 02:32 PM


Beautiful Sea...thank you for sharing  

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