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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2001-09-13 01:19 AM



and tretchory has reached the peaks of the world that we speak, the danger in the dew,, the mountains as they blew,

down the fall
has come,
and carrys ghosts and thunders pain.
in holy half hour the members of the watch tower, gather all the hearts and sew them apon sleeve, careful as we weave across the seven seas
our mourning

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


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1 posted 2001-09-13 01:29 AM


Hello my graceful one....should have known you'd be here. Hurts the heart of the soul, doesn't it? As always, you say so much with so few words...and always so gracefully, reminds me of the minimalism of Picasso...with words. Welcome home Miss "A".
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2 posted 2001-09-13 02:13 AM


RedHeartAngryBraids~
It pleases my heart to see you reaching out to us with your thoughts.
Thank you with *hugs*
~*Marge*~

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vlraynes
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3 posted 2001-09-13 02:20 AM



redheart angrybraids-
   Thank you so much for these heartfelt thoughts.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

redheart angrybraids
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4 posted 2001-09-16 12:10 PM


i feel us all, thank you  ladys
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5 posted 2001-09-16 02:34 PM


I would wonder which of us sees the more. . . and which of us feels the less. . .

welcome. . .

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