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Muted Plumes |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Teetering on the edge of beyond what seems real Fright takes hold of a nation The illusion of safety and the disillusion of reality Fade in a blend of muted plumes of smoke Souls finding Heaven, while others burn in hell Lives left behind forever saddened with loss Questions among many, friends and strangers alike How could this happen, how do they dare But one question lingers, burns in my heart “all in the name of God” Who is this Allah, anyway? |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Whisper, the same God who let his Son die on the cross to take all of our sins. But, remember that Satin can make himself "look" like God so many will follow him. I sometimes think his following is greater than the true God's. Thanks for the thoughts, ME |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
The two main stanzas are wonderfully executed! Powerfully woven!! |
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