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Dripping Memories
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Dripping Memories |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It was chill this morning As I stripped night's clothes And stepped into hot shower To wash away salty memories Of other evenings I always think of you Shared showers Scrubbing of backs with soapy slidings To cuddled fronts Hurried drying with towels soft As we ran laughing to jump Back under covers to keep the chill From catching us Late Autumn leaving breath To form clouds as heated passions Created warm fronts of our own It was chill this morning And when I stepped from shower The towel was not as inviting Nor did covers beckon Tented warming Shivering I wrapped myself in routine Forgetting the faucet dripped Unless tightened carefully |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Very good poem, especially the last stanza! Thanks for the enjoyable read! <3 RP |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Loved this... ~Tier |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh my........ I need to keep this |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
these are the right kind of memories. . . wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A wonderful vision of a very emotional and bittersweet time in life - One we've all unfortunately seen. Nice job, as usual..  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this is a wonderful, magnificently woven piece...given the time and day of posting, I'm curious as to whether it was written just before posting I find myself wondering if the 'chill' that tainted the usual emotion was created by the pain of the black Tuesday's news |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Once again, Captain, you've managed to bring about a story - your imagination, Sir...is remarkable, indeed.... |
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