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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2001-09-12 07:55 PM



We,
both angry
stared down reality
resolutely
aware, yet
uncaring
of the other's
needs
caring, yet
unaware
how the other
grieved~ or knew
if somehow, one of us
reached out,
we could remove
all doubt
but
we clung
to obstinate views
in painful separation
until I broke,
then he kissed me...

~Tier
9/01

© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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1 posted 2001-09-12 08:42 PM


that's my favorite way to end an argument Tier. . .  

great job. . .

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Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 507

2 posted 2001-09-12 09:45 PM


Oh the lady who expresses emotion in such beauty.   Wonderful!  
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