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Kevin
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0 posted 2001-09-12 02:13 PM


Sometimes we wish
We kept closed eyes
Dont make sense
Where sense denies
But here we see
A nation cries
Dont make sense
Where sense denies

© Copyright 2001 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-12 02:15 PM



You're very insightful, Kevin! Thank you for sharing this!

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2 posted 2001-09-12 02:24 PM


Kevin... you have said a great deal with your few words... I hope that it gets easier for you as the days go on, and that you find the understanding that the things that happened only make sense in the minds of people too obsessed with their own beliefs and their own needs that they strike out in horrible ways to draw attention to themselves or to lash out in extreme anger at a world they can't control... take care bud... and keep writing out what you feel... it in and of itself help us to understand at least a part of what is going on inside us.

Ron

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3 posted 2001-09-12 03:49 PM


very true said.

Charisma

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4 posted 2001-09-12 06:09 PM


Such heartfelt words, as we all try to cope. We must believe in each other and gather close. Thank you for sharing this.

Sincerely,
Regina

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5 posted 2001-09-12 06:16 PM


Tightly and brightly written.  Enjoyed.
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6 posted 2001-09-12 06:43 PM


Very true words. Your poem speaks the truth of this tragedy, there is no sense to be made.


~Alice~

"God bless America"

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)


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7 posted 2001-09-13 05:49 AM


Kelvin,

your words said it all...

HUGS

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