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Mysteria
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0 posted 2001-09-11 01:36 AM




~* Volcano Of Emotion *~

It was a promise,
a promise of love to last forever
that had brought them to this place.
As they saw each other from across the room,
their love magnetically guided them
as they floated on a cloud toward
making all their dreams a reality.

It’s all in the eyes -
I saw it in their eyes as they danced.
His hand reached for hers,
And in silence, they just stood there
soaking the sight of each other in.
They needed no words to express their love.
He sang a silent song to love her forever.
They stood sharing tears of joy and yearning.
She held him close, and his breath,
became her very essence, her scent his.

They had longed for this touch to complete
all the love that had been avowed.
As their lips met, a volcano of emotions erupted,
raining infectious tears of joy,
sprinkling the air around them with laughter.
They warmed the hearts of those looking on
with the electricity of their love.

I watched these two young lovers,
who, instinctively over mere days,
fit each other like a pair of
comfortable old slippers,
never to see the trash can of life.
I knew they had the secret to forever.

Two souls who are destined for eternity,
found that piece they were missing by
traveling half way around the world.
Nothing could keep them apart.
I looked at this love, and I knew
I had never felt it,
At least not yet.



~* For Two Very Special Friends and Lovers *~

art: Jim Warren "Pele's Passion www.jimwarren.com
music: Aerith - www.dolphinsdream.com

*~If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~
~* My Gramma, Mom and me *~

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1 posted 2001-09-11 02:11 AM


Mysteria~
Good to see you back here !
Nice write~

But ... even nicer ... COOL new photo !
You look terrific !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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2 posted 2001-09-11 02:38 AM



Mysteria-
   Welcome back.
   Nicely penned poem, and I agree with
   Marge...the new pic looks great!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Mysteria
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3 posted 2001-09-11 02:44 AM


Thank you both so much, and the photo is thanks to Marge - she is real good at shrinking stuff   so thank you Marge.  Wanted to get something done quickly for the lovebirds before they arrive home.  
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4 posted 2001-09-11 07:22 AM


I watched these two young lovers,
who, instinctively over mere days,
fit each other like a pair of
comfortable old slippers,
never to see the trash can of life.
I knew they had the secret to forever.

This is wonderful Mysteria. This is plainly and yet beautifully said!



Sincerely,
Regina

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5 posted 2001-09-11 07:26 AM


oh my......what a volvano of emotions flows over these blue pages.....LOVE IT!!!

and I adore Jim Warren's art too...

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

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6 posted 2001-09-11 12:54 PM


rwood: Had I made it more poetic it would have taken away from the purity of what I saw, thank you.


Charisma: I loved seeing this pure love too!  To witness soul mates finding each other was quite an experience. Thank you for reading this.

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