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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
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Texas

0 posted 2001-09-10 10:17 PM


Fuse


The tension’s quite unbearable
when you are out of reach.
The empty hours, quite terrible,
like sand without a beach.

My precious, have I told you
that I can’t resist the notion
that every time I hold you
my heart fights in an explosion?




(Thanks to all for the kindest of words.  Now off to bed with me.)

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-10-2001).]

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Voiceless
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Under the stars upon the wind
1 posted 2001-09-10 10:36 PM


I take it that the explosion
isn't that bad!
Sounds like you got something
great there, I know you
wrote about it great!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
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Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
2 posted 2001-09-10 10:37 PM


The explosion you speak of I know all to well.  It keeps you up late at night and occupies your mind most of the day.  thx for sharing

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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with you
3 posted 2001-09-11 01:19 AM


yet another I have enjoyed  
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