Open Poetry #15 |
Walking These Waters |
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Walking These Waters There will be a time when the river becomes heaven's sea Rising to the echoes of fallen egos against the other side This world will once again know the heart of the Cherokee As their journey with our maker strengthens native pride Equality is mirrored in the reflection of each open hand As the seeds of the Lobelia give the freedom of new breath This mighty circle will interlace the fingers of this land Giving re-birth to sacred inspiration against eyes of death Windows of the flute will shatter with the morning wind Stairways of the drum will spiral in celebration of dance The shackles shall be broken as warriors of peace descend Joining hands of dignity in an embrace of destiny's chance The struggles within shadows reclaim the spirit of Galilee The legends of yesterday inspire the wings of today's voice These arms hold true to their ghosts in this ritual of decree Walking the waters toward heaven upon my quested choice Mark Christopher **Just wanted to stop in and say HI to all and let you know my job has taken me offline again, I'm sorry to not be able to get in here and do replies, but I wanted to let everyone know why I was absent once again. I miss everyone and will try and get back in when ever possible. thanks, Mark. I have found in you ... a reflection of me ... and a path to the peace I have sought. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-10-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - Mark, so wonderful Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Equality is mirrored in the reflection of each open hand Mark, Lovely as ever.... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Remarkable Writing! Enjoyed!! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Well just cuz you wrote it I knew I was going to like it, but wow Mark, this is incredible writing. I loved it. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Windows of the flute will shatter with the morning wind Stairways of the drum will spiral in celebration of dance The shackles shall be broken as warriors of peace descend Joining hands of dignity in an embrace of destiny's chance The struggles within shadows reclaim the spirit of Galilee The legends of yesterday inspire the wings of today's voice These arms hold true to their ghosts in this ritual of decree Walking the waters toward heaven upon my quested choice' Hey baby...first of all, it's wonderful to see your name and your beautiful writing around here again...second, this is a spectacular poem...something only a heart with a vision like yours could write...perfect rhyme and cadence, as always...I love it, and, of course, you, too! talk to ya soon... k tried to write a letter |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cowboy, this is breathtaking, beauty. I just love the way you write |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
and once again you suprised us with your fabulous art of words.....know that we miss you when you're not around.... (((hugs)) Charisma |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
The shackles shall be broken as warriors of peace descend Joining hands of dignity in an embrace of destiny's chance Mark, a dream we should all hold dear. Your words inspire once again. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ My friend, my friend~ All I need do is wish you .. and poof ! there you are~ 'The legends of yesterday inspire the wings of today's voice' Beautiful ... the quest you wear so well~ *Hugs* gv ge yuhi~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Mark, Always great to read your fine work, well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There will be a time when the river becomes heaven's sea Rising to the echoes of fallen egos against the other side ==================================== Equality is mirrored in the reflection of each open hand As the seeds of the Lobelia give the freedom of new breath This mighty circle will interlace the fingers of this land Giving re-birth to sacred inspiration against eyes of death Windows of the flute will shatter with the morning wind Stairways of the drum will spiral in celebration of dance ================================ The struggles within shadows reclaim the spirit of Galilee The legends of yesterday inspire the wings of today's voice These arms hold true to their ghosts in this ritual of decree Walking the waters toward heaven upon my quested choice ===================================== well you made it real hard to leave off lines, there are so many very very cool images and intentions here.... With every new path traveled on your quest you take us on a journey of vision and wisdom. This one breathes of promise and of the pride found in an ancestory rich in tradition and heritage. Nothing cliche' here my friend..and youve wrapped these images in your gift of cadence and your passion for words that paint pictures. I dont care what you gotta do to post... walk on your lips... I just want to be able to read your souls poetry Beautiful Mark/Maga jm Well I looked to the sky for my anthem |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
You know that I can't see your name and not read, my friend. And I'm never dissapointed. Wonderful pride you show in such incredible people. I'm so proud of the fact that I possess native american ancestry. Beautiful poetry, Mark, I enjoyed it greatly. *Krista Knutson* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was so touching, respectful, and truthful. I see your soul and heart grow stronger on your quest. Beautiful poetry. *~If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ya didnt think I was gonna forget pics did ya and this one is special remember the magents lil sis bought??.... butterfly magic baby...ya cant help but feel it Well I looked to the sky for my anthem The words and the music came through But words and music can never touch The beauty that I've seen in you [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 09-11-2001).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Incredible writing Mark, my friend. Your heart speaks with great power and beauty! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
As always, Mark, apppreciate your words. Sending peace and love out to your area.. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a welcome read. Be well, stay safe. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your ability to paint with words is exceeded only by your dedication... and you share both beautifully in this, cowboy. Every line is perfect. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am so glad that 'suthern' brought this one back up, as I missed it in all the madness and insanity of the past 2 weeks. It is very uplifting and comforting. " Equality is mirrored in the reflection of each open hand As the seeds of the Lobelia give the freedom of new breath This mighty circle will interlace the fingers of this land Giving re-birth to sacred inspiration against eyes of death" [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 09-26-2001).] |
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