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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-09-10 07:59 AM


A Candy Coated Apple

My specialty is fantasy
An apple coated in candy
Wrapped in the sweet of oracy
Sprinkled and topped with blarney

It is a trip to Shangri-la
On a dreamers ship called wile
Which of course is not far because
It starts in a mind of guile.

The passage is of little fare to
Travel to endeavors shore.
It cost but a tokens dare of
Releasing what’s behind the door.

Come take my hand and we will fly
Like butterflies in the sun
We’ll fly into your heavens lie
Till you and sun become as one

A trip upon a magic sea
Fantasized by a wish to be.


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Nan
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1 posted 2001-09-10 08:18 AM


I'd share an apple with you anytime, Sweet Sy..


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-09-10 08:41 AM


Nan,
So we are back to apples again. LOL *L*

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-09-10 08:56 AM


Come take my hand and we will fly
Like butterflies in the sun
We’ll fly into your heavens lie
Till you and sun become as one

A trip upon a magic sea
Fantasized by a wish to be.
===============================

OH MY ... BIG OLE SY-*SIGH*

you knew that verse was gonna get me didnt ya  
me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'll bring you candied apples
those sweet treats on a stick
I'll plant for you an orchard
an apple a day ... you can pick

With apples from Eden ..
I'll bake you an apple pie
serve it with some spicy tea
I'll be your Eve...for you are the apple of my eye


*winkiewinkie*


Well I looked to the sky for my anthem
The words and the music came through
But words and music can never touch
The beauty that I've seen in you

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-09-10 09:08 AM


JM,
My dearest sugar plum, Your apple is accepted
And I will meet you in the garden and sip with thee spiced tea. You can count the colors on my wings and I will do the same to thee. Winkiewinkie

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5 posted 2001-09-10 12:34 PM


I love my fantasy sprinkled with blarney. Just yummy!!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2001-09-10 01:55 PM


Hey I want to share a candy coated apple with someone too : )Good write
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-09-10 04:13 PM


Its a date...
I'll be there ... with bells on  
and winkies too *L*


Well I looked to the sky for my anthem
The words and the music came through
But words and music can never touch
The beauty that I've seen in you

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with you
8 posted 2001-09-10 04:26 PM


Seymour~ this is wonderful! Sets the mind to drifting in dreams!  
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9 posted 2001-09-10 04:26 PM


oh I will take your hand and fly with you like butterflies in the sun....I'm on my way to make that trip upon a magic sea.....*sigh*....

((hugs))
Charisma

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10 posted 2001-09-10 07:11 PM


A lovely voyage, got room for one more?

Cor

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