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Fallen Pen |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Drifting from my hand to floor, My ink pen, Has escaped my grasp once more, Thought words in my hand won’t keep, Fallen pen, My body has gone to sleep, Dancing thoughts inside my brain, Fallen in, Dreams flowing down sleeping drain Then imaginary quill, Filling in But not a page would it fill, Inkless pen. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Drifting from my hand to floor, Has escaped my grasp once more, Thought words in my hand won’t keep, My body has gone to sleep, Dancing thoughts inside my brain, Dreams flowing down sleeping drain Then imaginary quill, But not a page would it fill, ...you fill these pages with many thoughts..and my inkless mind with temptation at times... oh just had to say it.. sorry, forgive me... it was just my nakdthoughts unfolding this morn. M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Then imaginary quill, Filling in But not a page would it fill, Inkless pen. ------------------------- Your pen is certainly not inkless..... I know how it feels that to be so at times.... You have expressed it sooo well.......and I enjoyed the read. I'll add this to my library ...in case a friend might need to hear it.....  Thank you ************************ "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Like this.... mine is trying to quiet all the thoughts enough to pen them LOl Can't tell you how many times I've written something with duplo building being built on my back LOL ~Connie~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I have felt this all to often myself Gloom. Your pen shall never run dry though, there is to much poetry in you. Nice write. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
I love the descriptive stye you use in this one, thx for the read. There's a peace inside us all |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Nakdthoughts, Always a pleasure to please you. Thank you, Melody No inkless pens, I lose them long before that, Glad to add a page. Thank you, Zinsser, My thoughts are myriad and it’s hard to find the time To place them on paper properly. Thank you, Gentle Spirit Yes, I have been called “Full of it” many times. Pleased you liked my words. Thank you, baerlon The style form of this one in an inversion of my normal one. Sometimes I need a few more words and little more time. Gloom |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Gloom... you certainly have filled my mind with thoughts from reading your words..and inkless..I doubt your pen ever inkless.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In light of the recent week, this penning was somehow a bit prophetic...or perhaps it is just now that I read it, and see it as such... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Cpat Hair, I’m glad to fill thoughts, Yes I’ve but to sit and begin to write, Always plenty of Gloom to write of. Thank you, Sunshine, Perhaps it was, Since then I have not posted, The pen is sort of inkless, but by choice. Now there is enough Gloom about without my words. Considering the nature of most my writing. I shall attempt writings with touches of hope, Glimmers in the dark. Gloom |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
then we pick it up once more, or write from the veins in our souls! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
for you  this is a fine poem! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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