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PoemCrazy
Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159


0 posted 2001-09-10 03:08 AM


after the rain falls
admire the beauty you see
or curse the sky's tears?
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drop. rain. drop. rain. drop.
rhythm and rhyme, but no words,
is this poetry?
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i mow i mow oh!
(administrative edit)
time to mow again!
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he he!  don't dare me!...tom

Tom, please refrain from using asterisks to replace unacceptable words or terms when posting. Thanks for your understanding.
Nancy

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-10-2001).]

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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2001-09-10 03:10 AM


Too late darlin I already did dare you teehee...these are great...so when you gonna mow the yard?
shadow974
Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
2 posted 2001-09-10 03:15 AM


You could let it grow all summer then mow it with a combine. Love your poems

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

[This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 09-10-2001).]

PoemCrazy
Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159

3 posted 2001-09-10 03:22 AM


He he!
Hi!

Paula Finn:

> Too late darlin I already did dare you > teehee...these are great...so when you > gonna mow the yard?

next week.
he he!


shadow974:
> Do like I do and let it grow all summer
> then mow it with a combine.

soon as i figure out what that is
and where to get one.

> Love your poems

thanks!


it's a grass thing, really...tom

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