Open Poetry #15 |
Possessing Flame |
snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
If I tried with every part of my ability, Do you think I could recapture The mysterious magic of this day? After the raindrops have scattered And the clouds have parted ways, Will this flare remain lit? Down the roads I so travel, Along the paths I so tread, I sense you in my veins, Carry you in the depths of the affection That you have so certainly attained. My thread surges with the flow of your words; The rush by which I am taken is derived From the meticulously thunderous heat in your eyes. I walked down this street today, Wondering how the tide rises, But you were not in view when I turned to ask... I tried to access you with an intent gaze, But the distance just impaired its direction. Oh, baby, it just seems the more I need you, The greater the space between us... If I tried with all of my might, Do you think I could recapture The mysterious magic of this day? After the raindrops have scattered And the clouds have parted ways, Will this flare remain lit? -kh tried to write a letter |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Oh Snowpants, what a fabulous write....I do hope that you may recapture the mysterious magic of this day... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I sense you in my veins, Carry you in the depths of the affection That you have so certainly attained. My thread surges with the flow of your words; The rush by which I am taken is derived From the meticulously thunderous heat in your eyes. I walked down this street today, Wondering how the tide rises, But you were not in view when I turned to ask... I tried to access you with an intent gaze, But the distance just impaired its direction. Oh, baby, it just seems the more I need you, The greater the space between us... ======================================== oh I love this one....the intensity, the ache of the emotions and longing wrapped in images of the ocean and devotion ... very cool..BUT .... you better be careful... all this talk of flames and flares??? someone might think you been hanging around a moth or something (hehe) those lines I bolded....WAAY cool... so you've met Rob Thomas then?? ROFLAMO very well done poetess frostpockets Well I looked to the sky for my anthem |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Beautifully done..you sure do have a way with your words..I like it a lot <3 RosePetal |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ I so enjoy reading the soft sincerity in your pieces. *gentle hugs and smiles* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, this is so beautiful....... I liked this very much |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I enjoyed this so much. I think Marge hit it right on...your words are so sincere. Very well written. Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautiful!! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Do you think I could recapture The mysterious magic of this day? After the raindrops have scattered And the clouds have parted ways, Will this flare remain lit? I think you did! I think it will! Wonderful verse SP! Sincerely, Regina |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey guys...I know it's ridiculously late, BUT, I've been away, so that's my story and I'm stickin' to it... Charisma: thank you, my friend...I do too! Glad you liked this! J: thanks girlie...hmmm...better heed that advice... ...AND, you are too funny...do you think I'd be sitting here THIS calmly if I had met him?? that'd mean I'd have to be totally numb to life...hehe... Rosepetal: thank you so much...I truly appreciate your kind words! Marge: thanks, m'friend...I am happy you enjoyed... SEA: thanks! glad you liked it! Nancy: thank you, too! I appreciate your reply! shadow: thanks! Regina: you are so kind...thank you so much! sp tried to write a letter |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me think |
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