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Open Poetry #15

It's consuming

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-09-09 09:14 AM

The outer me
is happy
it smiles at little children
pretending is content
it hugs love
The inner me
hides like a child
it cries in corners
This invisible struggle
between what's right and wrong
between love and war
it's consuming

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-09-09 09:30 AM

I can hear you, and you captured these feelings very well...I can relate on this poem too.

((hugs))
Charisma

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-09-09 09:45 AM

wow..so true..you are expressing all my feelings today *s

~Wynter

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-09-09 03:00 PM

This invisible struggle
between what's right and wrong
between love and war
it's consuming

Maybe it's time to take your losses and walk away from the front line. Good, though sad write, walker.

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