Open Poetry #15 |
Mine |
Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Mine Those lips are not mine to kiss, to taste, to be comforting when the day’s a waste. They are owed someone else who knows not to savor their value, their flavor, knows not how soothing their touch can be. So why do I linger on thoughts of their favor? - Those eyes, that smile, so fine, are not mine. [This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-09-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can see you would like them to be...James |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such bittersweet thoughts - Well written, Topheth.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am going to enjoy your work very much, Topeth! Well done! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Oh, I love this one, T...very tender *think I will save it... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
ow...right outta my heart... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Bittersweet thoughts....like it very much Charisma |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
feels like there is much more to this....... touching....very touching. I like this |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Such bittersweet full of yearning thoughts.... I really enjoyed it...... Thank you ********************* |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I can see from the first two poems that I've red that you're going to be one of my favorites. loved this! ~Tier |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i ditto Tier...oh, please post more!! by the way, Tier writes some awesome short poems herself.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Topheth, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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