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Topheth
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0 posted 2001-09-09 07:20 AM


Mine


Those lips are not mine
to kiss,
to taste,
to be comforting
when the day’s a waste.
They are owed someone else
who knows not to savor
their value,
their flavor,
knows not how soothing
their touch can be.
So why do I linger
on thoughts of their favor?
-
Those eyes,
that smile,
so fine,
are not mine.

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-09-2001).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-09-09 07:22 AM


I can see you would like them to be...James
Nan
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2 posted 2001-09-09 08:02 AM


Such bittersweet thoughts - Well written, Topheth..
Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-09-09 08:25 AM



I am going to enjoy your work very much, Topeth!  Well done!

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2001-09-09 08:28 AM


Oh, I love this one, T...very tender

*think I will save it...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



RSEvans
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5 posted 2001-09-09 08:28 AM


ow...right outta my heart...
Charisma
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6 posted 2001-09-09 10:08 AM


Bittersweet thoughts....like it very much

Charisma

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7 posted 2001-09-09 05:49 PM


feels like there is much more to this.......
touching....very touching.   I like this  

MyEnchanted_Melody
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8 posted 2001-09-09 06:00 PM




Such bittersweet full of yearning thoughts....

I really enjoyed it......

Thank you
*********************

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2001-09-09 06:19 PM


I can see from the first two poems that I've red that you're going to be one of my favorites.


loved this!

~Tier

kaile
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10 posted 2001-09-10 08:59 AM


i ditto Tier...oh, please post more!!

by the way, Tier writes some awesome short poems herself..

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-09-10 09:21 AM


Topheth,
Well done enjoyed the read.

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