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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-09-08 07:03 PM


Would you like some blood to drink,
now that you're a vampire?
Opened all my veins of love
threw me in the fire.

Drops of passion spill to earth,
heart ripped out so cruely.
Now I lay in tears of blood
this is how you use me.

Feel my life all over you,
remains of your last kiss.
Hot blood left with no use now,
go on and take the rest...

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2001-09-08 07:07 PM


Searing.  

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


RSEvans
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2 posted 2001-09-08 07:12 PM


I sense some anger here...but all the same a vivid and flattering comment on my poem.
Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2001-09-08 07:55 PM


Oh my.  Someone is hurting.  Very intriguing.
Joyce

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