Blood and Tears - a repost in reply to"Vampires of the Heart"

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Open Poetry #15

Blood and Tears - a repost in reply to"Vampires of the Heart"

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-09-08 07:03 PM

Would you like some blood to drink,
now that you're a vampire?
Opened all my veins of love
threw me in the fire.

Drops of passion spill to earth,
heart ripped out so cruely.
Now I lay in tears of blood
this is how you use me.

Feel my life all over you,
remains of your last kiss.
Hot blood left with no use now,
go on and take the rest...

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2001-09-08 07:07 PM

Searing.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

2 posted 2001-09-08 07:12 PM

I sense some anger here...but all the same a vivid and flattering comment on my poem.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-09-08 07:55 PM

Oh my. Someone is hurting. Very intriguing.
Joyce

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