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Open Poetry #15

Wrong Love

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 2001-09-08 06:32 PM

Wrapped in the vines of memory
  Clothed in the painful song
Memories of what you meant to me
  Of where it all went wrong.

Waterfalls of hateful words,
  Deep rivers of bad intentions,
We battled on though ubsurd
  Too many nights to mention.

When the days became our nights
  And the meaning was all gone
And endless love became endless fights
  We could see that we were wrong.

So what becomes of once cherished love?
  Where do the feelings go?
I thought it was from up above
  But seems more down below.

I don't hate you, I never could
  You're heart was once my own
But now we both know that we should
  Have left well enough alone.

So you go your way, I'll go mine
  Never the twain shall meet
And so it shall go on through time
  'Ere the flames we greet.

Knight of the Rose.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2001-09-08 06:37 PM

When the days became our nights
And the meaning was all gone
And endless love became endless fights
We could see that we were wrong.

Your words are just so powerful!!
Good Write, absolutely beautiful.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-09-08 06:57 PM

Oh, what a strong poem, you said a lot here. It hurts still, when things go this way, I know.
Sandra

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